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This is my first design for any toy. So some c&c would be most welcome :)
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this one is really cool love the expression and use of colors great
the second series is in for some huge winners!
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Thanks walison :)
I agree, there are some really good ideas and lovely designs about! Looking forward to seeing how it spans out.
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Hi wintersMyth! I really like this design! Just out of curiosity, what are the yellow dotted lines on his head?
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thats his bumble flying around his head, and he is sad cause he can't reach it :)
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What walison said :D
(that was ace!)
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lol, oh...ok!
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there wasn't really any clear thought behind it, just loved walison's suggestion. Do you think I should remove it? Keep it cleaner?
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no no no make a little bee flying on the back of his head in the dotted line
then that bee has got his bumble and the other one is said he hasnt and therefore cant fly ;)
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ooh, good plan, I'll give that a go. Thanks walison! :D
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I've made some minor adjustments, added a bee and made his face black, what do you think? Which version do you guys prefer? 
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love the bee but the old face was better this one is 2 dark for me doesnt have the magic the first face has
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yeah, I think I agree with you walison, regarding the face. Just thought since I had black on the bee, I should pick up the black somewhere else, so it doesn't stand out as much, but it didn't quite work.
Tried to use another dark colour for the bee instead, but that didn't work either. Does anyone have any suggestions?
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Move the bee more to the back of the head. Change the order of black and yellow - make the head yellow, then black stripe, then yellow etc. Maybe make the wings white. You could try putting yellow scribbles around the wings - like vibration marks? just some thoughts.
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thanks incorrectlyguessing, I'll have a play with that. Here are two more ideas, will just add to this thread, instead of starting tons of critique threads :) Let me know what you think? Zombie Joe  Mr Couldron Head 
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not so fond with the zombie one but the other one wowowowowowow
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yeah, Mr. Cauldron head is pretty cool!
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Thanks guys. Zombie Joe's actually my fav of them, but glad you liked couldron head, it'll make him happy :)
Any changes I should make?
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Here's a new one. 
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